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Author Topic: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
bastuden
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Post Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 29, 2012, 16:01
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The wind wipped wild thru Wintersun. The air was moist and thick as gum. The Norson Druids descend on Duu. Its city walls now cooked like stew.

While children lie on beds of blood, their Mother’s screams still twist the air.
Their dreams interred in graves of mud… Their Bodies mixed…, and mangled in dispare.

A lone blue Knight recalls the fight… and gripps his head, hung low.
Bestowed in horror. Cloaked in ash… in dust…, and gore of foe.

The scene distilled, horrific and serene
As the ancient druids approached…

Chills incensed the panic in their pace
With anger hot, as steam encased…

Aghast, they chant their vengeance loud…

The distant hounds of doom howl…, slaked and proud.
Rockfilip
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 29, 2012, 22:20
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hmm sounds nice,good job!

The Dark Lords are on my side.... what will protect you from pernament death?
Rockfilip
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 29, 2012, 22:20
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hmm sounds nice,good job!

The Dark Lords are on my side.... what will protect you from pernament death?
Adventure
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 29, 2012, 22:43
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You have talent :) Do you do any other writing.
Fiufsciak
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 29, 2012, 22:58
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Nice 😀

Fiufść!
sean2567
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 30, 2012, 01:03
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Awesome but a little creepy
ScarZ
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: December 31, 2012, 13:26
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Nice 😀

Dr. Tran
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: January 3, 2013, 10:22
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Good, but very dark

I got the moves like Jagger
Rockfilip
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: January 3, 2013, 11:57
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This really has potential, but needs to be less darker or Ian wont approve it.

The Dark Lords are on my side.... what will protect you from pernament death?
bastuden
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Post Re: Wintersun Lore : Opening Poem (Work in progress, alpha sample, not complete)
on: January 4, 2013, 18:02
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why not? This is a hardcore PVP focused mmorpg. I'd like to hear what Ian actually thinks.
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